Assignment I Draft~ "Musings in an Aquarium"

Aqua bowl, sealed sea

A fish that questions the world

Freedom, like a bird

Girl with braid departs like wind

Comfort gone like the tree leaves 

(DANIEL MADRIGAL)

Comfort, she craves for

Emotions in a braid, she

Stares, question in mind

The lone tree waves it's branches

Her fish swims as though crippled

(Yvvone Yee)

Draws a question
Braid of thoughts, conflict feelings
The lush tree dances
Please mom, a fish like rainbow?
Comfort the lonely other

(Eliza)

Dream to find comfort

In silence, fish questions

How great; life on tree

Without und'standing the brunt

That, in real. Its likes a braid

(primila)

Question I answered,
To untie braid of feelings
Says me to the fish
Don’t seek comfort in green trees
When you belong to the sea
(zainab)





Girl, planted it there
Merely fish; Without question
Seeked comfort from it,
His braid of thoughts unaware
Tree smothered him; oblivion.

(Arththi)

fish in the aquarium wants to be a bird-fish alone POV )questioning)
girl with braid POV owns a fish
mum buys another fish for her- wen to market
she has a new fish in the aquarium-2 fish living together
fish 2 advices fish 1
chemical plastic tree kills them

hi guys.....

thank you guys......

ASSIGNMENT 1

prompts

1. braid
2. fish
3. comfort
4. tree
5. question

looking forward to what we make outta these
love
arththi