Aqua bowl, sealed sea
A fish that questions the world
Freedom, like a bird
Girl with braid departs like wind
Comfort gone like the tree leaves
(DANIEL MADRIGAL)
Comfort, she craves for
Emotions in a braid, she
Stares, question in mind
The lone tree waves it's branches
Her fish swims as though crippled
(Yvvone Yee)
Draws a question
Braid of thoughts, conflict feelings
The lush tree dances
Please mom, a fish like rainbow?
Comfort the lonely other
(Eliza)
Dream to find comfort
Question I answered,
To untie braid of feelings
Says me to the fish
Don’t seek comfort in green trees
When you belong to the sea
(zainab)
Girl, planted it there
Merely fish; Without question
Seeked comfort from it,
His braid of thoughts unaware
Tree smothered him; oblivion.
(Arththi)
Draws a question
Braid of thoughts, conflict feelings
The lush tree dances
Please mom, a fish like rainbow?
Comfort the lonely other
(Eliza)
Dream to find comfort
In silence, fish questions
How great; life on tree
Without und'standing the brunt
That, in real. Its likes a braid
(primila)
Question I answered,
To untie braid of feelings
Says me to the fish
Don’t seek comfort in green trees
When you belong to the sea
(zainab)
Girl, planted it there
Merely fish; Without question
Seeked comfort from it,
His braid of thoughts unaware
Tree smothered him; oblivion.
(Arththi)
thanks yvonne
ReplyDeleteim still working on it
arththi
btw its really good ur poem
ReplyDeleteme likey a lot :)
also eliza took the paper where i wrote down which hyperlinks to link so i forgot who is linking what
arththi
nice title i like it..... :)
ReplyDeleteLOL.. Thanks RT :) I like urs more~~~haha XD
ReplyDeleteI like the sound of the title u suggested~Musings~~~hmm..deep..haha..
Err.. I only rmb my link is fish to Eliza's.. Can ask her 2moro lo ^^
sorry lambat kawan. the internet is treating me like trash. i think my laptop got virus that forbids my connection. so sorry again.
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