THE DETECTIVE

     I paced my steps in this dingy chalet room that I have turned so eloquently into my makeshift office, interrogation room, and sleeping quarters as the storm raged on outside the window. In my heart I cursed whatever Rain God that lived in the sky for daring to spoil the investigations of the great detective Lim. I rushed over quickly when I got the call only to get stuck on this dingy island because of this storm. The case at hand would be much simpler if the rain didn’t destroy all traces of physical evidence at the scene, footprints, fingerprints, hairs, blood, all except the ring. The ring. Suspicion crept like a thief into my genius intellect. It is evidence so clear, so blatantly obvious that I couldn’t believe it. Never in my seven years in the Homicide Division have I ever come across evidence this clear.
       I threw the pictures of the suspects on the desk, there were only three pictures, the only three living guest in this resort minus the victim, the two bumbling officers I brought with me and myself. There were no other guest in this small resort at this time of the year and all the workers had alibis as they were in the staff room at the time of the murder. I had already interrogated the suspects. Upin, my prime suspect spent most of the interrogation mumbling and crying out the victim’s name, he did however admit that the ring was his. Again my deductive sonar acted up, if he really was the culprit, why would he admit such a thing unless he was a bigger idiot than I thought. He currently is in one of the resort rooms under constant watch by Officer Abu and Officer Ah Gun. The second suspect Sofia spent her interrogation in tears and I barely got a straight sentence from her, she was apparently good friends with the victim so I guess I can’t blame her. Finally there was Ipin, the suspect’s brother. He acted legitimately surprised and heartbroken that his brother was a murderer. However, when I showed him the ring he was quick to point out it was his brother’s. I was wary of this, so I tried every trick question in the book to get something out of him but it was all for nought. He was either very innocent or very tricky.
     Realizing I need a breather, I took my packet of half-eaten nasi lemak and left the room searching for the nearest trash can. I entered the empty cafeteria down the hallway; the lights were off so I couldn’t see a thing. Blind as a bat I began caressing the walls looking for a switch. After a few moments I found and flipped it and light danced back into the room. “Detective...,” I heard a sudden voice behind me. The thoughts raced inside my head, the murderer has taken this opening to remove me from the picture, for he knows my genius intellect and admirable cunning would trap him in the end. I turned around as graceful as a fox and stepped into my Five Animal Style Kung-fu stance to pulverize the culprit. Instead of attacking killer I saw only a frightened girl, it was Sofia. “You sca...I mean you nearly got yourself hurt sneaking up on me” I said.
“I’m very sorry” she uttered with fright “I didn’t mean to.”
     “I need to tell you something,” she said. She gestured towards the nearest chair and we sat across each other; all the while I eyed her suspiciously. She could look quite pretty and cheerful but currently the only thing she looked like was fear. She began “I...I saw a...a...coconut.”
“...What?”
“He...he smashed the coconut,” she continued.
“You mean the murderer used a coconut as the murder weapon?” I answered in shock.
No! I saw the murderer, it was Ipin!!” she finally shouted.
Daniel Madrigal A129471

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